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:bulletred: Kiriban at 20,000
:bulletred: The Hex Girls-GMD style
:bulletred: OC bio for Alana cel Rau
:bulletred: OC bio for Lila Flint
:bulletblue: OC picture of Dominick
:bulletred: Kaa story sequel
:bulletred: Bernard's ego stroking comic


Stories/Art in progress:
:bulletyellow: Some kind of story for Alana cel Rau, Fane's daughter
:bulletyellow: To Love a Criminal: Cimarron and Ratigan
:bulletyellow: To Trust a Pirate: Sandra and Ratigan (Got a few stuff)
:bulletyellow: Eliza and Basil 100 themes
:bulletyellow: Avengers Pranks
:bulletyellow: AvengersxReader
:bulletyellow: RatiganxReader stories
:bulletyellow: Dusk till Dawn story
:bulletyellow: Disney City RP journals

Gifts to start on/in progress:
:bulletred: Alana getting revenge for Sofie for WingsOfASong
:bulletred: Brody D&D OC for Commanderjalc
:bulletred: Sarah Caultry and Cimarron Starbright in comic WingsOfASong
:bulletorange: GMD OC ladies together: Ali, Edith Burke, Sarah Caultry, Birdie, Amber Mus, Cimarron Starbright, Sandra Flint, Alana cel Rau, Charlotte, Lucille, Agnieska, Elsa Wilch...(more to come the more I find out)
:bulletred: GMD OC boys together: Fane cel Rau, Ray Lehmann, Oliver Loran, Michael Zepp, Bastial, Diego, Bernard, Zven, Stas, Athelstan, Justin O'Brian, Lars Maurus, Damien Sorena...(more to come the more I find out)
:bulletred: GMD Non/OC villains together: Fane cel Rau, Lars Maurus (?) , Ratigan, Dominick, Daniel Sterling, Bernard, Alejo

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And THANK YOU to those who draw my OC babies in your interpretation of them! I love them to death! Thank you!
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Cimarron Starbright TGMD - Cimarron Starbright stamp by Yaraffinity
Cimarron by Toony-Tornado GMD OCs: Cimarron Starbright by ALS123 Dance With Me by VDupLEX Christmas Rodent Party by VDupLEX Not Enough Spice by VDupLEX Gift : Dance ? by Birdy-Papa
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“I will ride, I will fly,
chase the wind and touch the sky.”

Bristol, England, 1890
It was a balmy night in the port town of Bristol.  A floating forest of tall ships dipped and bobbed in the harbor, their sails trimmed and secured for the night, as seabirds circled overhead calling out to each other. The rigging clanked, the cables groaned against their moors in tune with ships bells. The lanterns on the bow and stern flickered as the tall ships dipped and rocked with the waves lapping against the seawall. The air was heavy with the scent of salt and fish mixed with the more exotic aromas of cargo from all over the Empire. Around and under the warehouses and buildings an entire world existed.  Rats, mice, and other creatures went about their business hidden from the eyes of their human counterparts.  They exchanged stories, engaged in betting sports, and made deals in taverns of their own design.  
Chase the Wind P2
United Winds
"Love one another, but make not a bond of love: Let it rather be a moving sea between the shores of your souls."-Khalil Gibran
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Connor had business affairs to take care of in Bristol, and he sent a telegram off to London. Afterward, he had a picnic hamper made up by the local grocer and arranged for a carriage tour of the seaside. He cleaned up and put on a fresh cream colored linen long sleeved shirt, a dark green vest, and dark gray slacks along with a burgundy damask silk ascot that was fastened with a small gold and emerald circular Celtic knot pin. He splashed on some cologne on his neck and chin then brushed out his fur and hair fastening it into a tidy ponytail.
He bought a bouquet of a dozen pink roses mixed with heather and yellow mums on his way to pick her up. He met her at the tavern entrance where he helped her up into the cart the bouquet of flowers r
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My Great Mouse Detective Literature

To Love A Criminal:
Cimarron Starbright, a gypsy rat, has traveled far and wide throughout London, surviving by playing her music and dancing in the streets. But one day, she discovers that Professor Ratigan is still alive after stumbling upon his secret lair!
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To Trust A Pirate:
Captain Sandra Flint was once captain over her beloved ship that her father has passed on to her and her sister Lila. But trouble is on the horizon as her evil lover Dominick Alexander betrayed her, taking over her ship and torturing her. She and Lila escapes, and soon stumbles upon another fearsome pirate captain, Captain Ratigan. She makes a deal with him a share of the treasure in exchange for help to get back her ship. She had sworn herself never to fall in love again after what happened with Dominick. But as time passes, she feels her heart soften with the new captain. Can she afford to give her heart to another? Or does she risk getting her heart broken once more and losing her ship and crew forever?
Story is currently under way, but you can find her bio and other information about her here
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BasilxEliza (Creative title entered later)
She's an adventurous outspoken Australian reporter. He's a determined and stubborn detective. Can these two headstrong mice get along? Follow them on their adventures of spats, angst, love, passion, and conquering evil.
(The story is a bit out of order at the moment, but I will fix that soon.)
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Ok, so I was watching some  fan videos of Disney PrincessxDisney Villain and what not, and I noticed that there's not a lot of RatiganxDisney Princess pairings out there, which is a dang shame, because Ratigan is such a lovable villain and as freaking awesome as the other Disney Villains, maybe even more so. I've only seen a couple of videos where he's paired with human people, Belle, Jasmine, and a Non-Disney girl Holli Would. And what's weird is that people pair Non/Disney Princesses with Thrax (Non-Disney villain from Osmosis Jones) with girls all the time, and may I remind you, he is a freaking VIRUS, very very miniscule in real life, yet people pair him with Non/Disney ladies all the time, so what the heck would be the difference with Ratigan and Thrax anyway? So then I thought, "Ooooh, what if I did a roleplay where he could meet Disney Princess? Oh what fun that would be!!" :dummy: :la: 

So that's what I'm going to do here, guys. I'm going to host a roleplay here where you all bring forth and roleplay as any Disney woman you think of, Kida, Meg, Esmeralda, Ariel, Pocahontas, Captain Amelia, Belle, Jasmine, you name it, and I will roleplay as Ratigan, and we could get some adventures and romance going! :la: Now,again, I will remind you that this is a world where anything can happen, so how Ratigan gets to be the size of a human or the girl gets to be the size of a rat, it doesn't matter. You can use portals to different dimensions, some kind of magic happens, it's a world where it's ok for humans and rodents are same height and can communicate with each other, etc. Anything is possible and it's Disney magic, yo, don't question it! :laughing: Also, make sure you know their personality well enough that it will be at least mostly in character, AND have some good description in the roleplay as well, like what they are thinking and feeling and describing stuff around them.


So let's get started! Bring forth your Disney princesses and let's get them acquainted with our awesome ladies man Ratigan! :eyes: :iconratigansinisterplz: He's waiting for you...
((feel like roleplaying as my OC Alana cel Rau, this girl here --> Alana cel Rau by romancefreak ))

Alana: *smiles charmingly, sitting comfortably in a plush sofa, her silky ocean blue dress shaping her body and a slash in her skirt, showing off her pretty legs* Hello, my darlings. I am the Countess Alana cel Rau, vampire daughter of Fane cel Rau :iconfane-cel-rau-rp: and Adrianna cel Rau. I have been appearing here and there for some time now, but unfortunately, my creator has been rather...incompetent about showing my bio so you all can get to know me a little better.

Me: *calls from off screen* It's not like it's my fault my writer's block hates me! 

Alana: *rolls her eyes, waving her hand* Ignore her. Anyways, she has asked me if I could kindly be of service and let all of you ask any questions you may have about me, and then she can get her stuck brain to be able to write my bio. *smiles, crossing a pretty leg and sipping blood wine out of her wine glass* So, ask away, my pets. Don't be afraid to approach me. I won't bite...much. :eyes: 

(Bit of background info recap: As you can see, she looks much like her father with dark fur and long black hair. But from her mother, she has the curliness in her hair and her chocolate brown eyes when they are not red. In personality, she is also like her father: charming, mischievous, suave, flirtatious, can rule with an iron fist when time calls for it and is a vampire. But she also has a sweet and gentle side to her like her mother when you really get close to her. She is professional in fencing and hand-to-hand combat, very artistic, and loves to read and dance. And she is VERY VERY flirtatious. :eyes: She prefers men, but she loves to tease and flirt with anything that breathes.)

    It was seven years later after Sebastian Doran’s death, and Ratigan was once again in his office on Christmas Eve, hunched at his desk as he took notes and made calculations of the money he collected. The room was dark and very cold, due to the weather outside, and the only source of light was Ratigan’s gas lamp and the very small fire that illuminated the room with a dull forbidding glow. It was three o’clock, but the streets were already very dark, and the eerie thick fog swallowed up the rodents of Mousedom as quickly as they would appear passing by Ratigan’s window, with the street lamps as their only light to guide them. But Ratigan did not mind the darkness, nor the cold. On the contrary, he liked it the way it was, because it suited his equally dark and cold demeanor. And besides, it would be a waste of money to spare more coal in the fireplace than was needed. Therefore, he kept the fire in his office very low. In the office next to him, however, the fire in there was even smaller, as if there was only one coal burning in it. The poor clerk in the office by the name of Mr. Hiram Flaversham, a middle aged mouse with large square glasses, red sideburns and bald head and a kind face, did not dare ask for more coal because Ratigan had threatened to fire his employee if he asked for more. So Mr. Flaversham tried to warm himself with what little flames he had, but he did not succeed.

     Just then, the door came open, and a tall mouse came striding in with a merry step.

    “A very Merry Christmas to you, Uncle Ratigan!” the young man called cheerily, tipping his hat to him.

     Ratigan lifted his eyes from his work, and saw that it was his nephew and only living relative, whom everyone knew as Basil of Baker Street. He was a tall handsome mouse, with light brown fur and a creamy underbelly. His emerald eyes twinkled with merriment and his smile was wide and warm. But Ratigan found no joy or warmth from seeing his nephew, and he merely greeted him gruffly in return. “Bah!” he muttered, turning his cold red eyes back to his work. “Humbug.”

    Basil’s ears perked in surprise. “Christmas, a humbug, Uncle?” he questioned, coming over to his desk. “Oh now surely you don’t mean that.”

    “I do,” Ratigan growled, turning his eyes back up to the detective. “What is so bloody merry about Christmas? And what right or reason do you have to be so merry? You’re poor!”

      Basil merely smiled; his uncle always had disapproved of Basil’s career as a detective, believing there was no financial promise in it, but Basil never paid heed to his lectures and by now they merely bounce off of him.

     “Oh come come, my good fellow,” Basil said breezily. “If that is so, then what right or reason do you have to be grouchy? You’re rich!”

     Ratigan’s lips twitched; he hated it when his nephew had a point. Unable to find no argument to that, he merely waved his hand and retorted, “Bah! Humbug!”

     “Oh don’t be so cross, Uncle Ratigan,” Basil said.

     “What else should I be, Basil?” Ratigan growled, looking back up at him. “Especially living in such a world of fools! A Merry Christmas, indeed! It’s a time for paying bills without any money to do it! It’s a time where you’re a year older and not a penny richer. It’s a time where foolish parents award their whiny little children with sweets and goodies when the little brats don’t deserve them. Why,” the corner of his lips twitched in a tiny but very mean smile, “if I had my way, every insufferable pipsqueak who struts about so cheerily wishing the world a Merry Christmas would be boiled in his own Christmas pudding! Or, ha,” he gave a cold harsh laugh with no humor, “even better, have a stake of holly rammed through his heart! Why, I wouldn’t care if Christmas never came again!”

    “Uncle Ratigan!” Basil cried, looking stunned. “That’s a terrible thing to day! Christmas means so much at this time of year! First, it’s a sacred and holy time of the year to remember the birth of the One who was born in a stable long ago. Secondly, it’s a good and selfless time where selfish desires are pushed aside to help those that are poor, ill, and less fortunate than themselves. It’s a time for giving, a time for peace with fellow men and women. It’s a time where it does not matter how much you have in your pocket as long as you have so much in your heart. Christmas brings so much cheer and joy that people forget their pride and are joined in unity with love and kindness towards one another, willing to open each other’s hearts to another, and for all of that, I say God bless Christmas!”

    At the end of Basil’s speech, Mr. Flaversham in the other room applauded his words. But then, realizing his mistake, he quickly busied himself with tending the pitiful fire in the stove, which sputtered and went out with a pop.

     “If I hear another sound from you, Mr. Flaversham, you will be spending your Christmas looking for a new job!” Ratigan threatened menacingly. The clerk gulped and nodded, “A-Aye, sir.” He nearly upset his ink bottle as his shaking hand reached for his quill.

      “See here, Uncle, don’t take it out on poor Flaversham,” Basil said sternly. “I simply wanted to invite you to my annual Christmas party tomorrow. You really should come, you know; I’ve always said you are always welcome to come.”

      Ratigan shook his head; his nephew always invited him every year to his silly party, though he had no idea why Basil even bothered. Ratigan never went to any of his parties, and he certainly won’t in the future.

     “Ha. I think I’d rather visit you down with the Devil before I go down to one of your ridiculous festivities,” Ratigan said cruelly, signing his name on one of the papers in front of him.

       Basil’s ears folded, looking a little hurt. It wasn’t as if this was the first time his uncle had turned down his invitations, and Basil had grown used to it by now. But this was the first time his uncle had said such a thing when declining his invite. “But why, Uncle?”

        “Why did you get married?” asked Ratigan with an eyebrow raised.

       “Because I fell in love with Felicity, of course,” Basil said, as if it were the most obvious thing in the world, unsure where this sudden question came from.

      “Because you fell in love!” Ratigan growled, shaking his head as his ears flicked back. “As if that isn’t something more ridiculous than Christmas! I don’t need to hear anymore of this nonsense. Good afternoon, sir.” He waved his hand in dismissal, bending his head over his work once more.

    But Basil stood where he was, looking at his uncle with pleading emerald eyes. “But Uncle Ratigan, you never came to see me before I fell in love. Why are you using my marriage as an excuse not to see me now?” he implored.

      Ratigan only dismissed him again, ignoring his question, his quill pen scratching away on his paper. “I said, good afternoon.”

    Basil sighed, deciding to drop it, clearly seeing that he did not want to discuss the matter anymore. He wondered if the reason Ratigan said such harsh things about Christmas and not wanting to visit him was because he had something terrible happen to him in his life. His uncle never talked about his past, and Basil wondered if he ever know about it. But that was a matter that would have to wait for another time. For now, he could still be the one person that will still reach out to him with love and warmth, even if he wouldn’t return it.“I’m truly sorry, Uncle Ratigan, to see you so stubborn,” he said sincerely. “We’ve had our differences, but we’ve hardly quarreled. But I have tried to keep the spirit of Christmas alive, and I will to the very end. So,” he said with a smile, putting on his top hat as his ears flicked up, “A very Merry Christmas to you, Uncle!”

            “Good day, Basil!” Ratigan growled, his tail swishing irritably.

            “And a Happy New Year!”

            “Good-bye!” Ratigan huffed, glaring after his nephew.

    Basil left the room with a merry spring in his step, stopping outside Flaversham’s office to wish him a Merry Christmas as well, to which Flaversham cheerfully returned the greeting. As Basil went out, three mice came in, stamping out their snow covered shoes and rubbing their chilled paws. Two of them were young men, one of them a kangaroo mouse with a confident air, brown eyes, and a charming face. The other was a common grey field mouse who had a shy demeanor about him, leading on his arm a beautiful female white mouse with a warm smile and sparkling eyes.

     After Flaversham led the three mice to Ratigan’s office, the kangaroo mouse swept his Australian hat off his head, smiling at the large rat. “G’day, mate. My name is Jake and these are my partners Bernard and his wife Bianca. This is Ratigan and Doran’s, aye?”

          Ratigan merely nodded.

       “Have I the pleasure of speaking to Mr. Ratigan or Mr. Doran?” Jake continued.

      “Mr. Doran has been dead for seven years,” Ratigan said stiffly. “Died seven years ago on this night, in fact.”

       “Oh, how dreadful,” Bianca said, her ears flicking back. “I’m terribly sorry for your loss, dear.”

       Ratigan waved his hand. “It’s alright, madam,” he said stiffly. “It was his time.”

       “Well, mate, we are from the Rescue Aid Society, which makes huge donations to charities. And I’m sure you as Mr. Doran’s partner would how generous Mr. Doran would be if he were here,” Jake said with a bright smile. Ratigan shook his head. Doran was no more charitable than he was.

        A little nervous at his negative reply, Bernard withdrew a file and some papers he was carrying in his bag, along with an ink bottle and quill pen. “W-well, sir, uh, as Jake said, the Rescue Aid Society is a-a large supporter to donating to charities all over London. It is especially important during this time of year to give extra food, warmth and Christmas cheer to the needy.”

        “We also like to ask citizens to help our group so they can make someone’s Christmas this year,” Bianca added warmly. “Would you like to donate, Mr. Ratigan? How much would should we put you down for?”

       “Nothing,” Ratigan snapped as he shut his heavy book.

       Jake smiled. “Oh, I see. You want to remain anonymous, am I right, mate?”

     “No sir, I wish to be left alone, and don’t call me ‘mate,’” Ratigan growled, standing up and glaring at them. “The orphanages and shelters are doing well enough without wasting any more money on such useless beings.”

      The three looked shocked hearing such harsh words, their ears perked and their eyes wide.

     “B-But, but sir,” Bernard stammered timidly. “There-there are some shelters that-that don’t have enough money or room to support all the rodents they house.”

      “And there are so many starving people on the streets that suffer without a home or food or warmth,” Biana pleaded. “Many will die without help.”

        “Then let them die!” Ratigan snarled, suddenly slapping his hands down on the table and making all three jump, his patience finally snapping. “There’s enough of those wretched poor creatures in this world anyhow! It would do good to decrease the surplus population weeding out all the useless poor. It is not my business to care about them  nor  do I care if you decide to waste your bloody time and money with them. Now, I must bid you good day. I have much to do.” With that, he returned to his work at his desk, his eyes flashing and grumbling fluently under his breath.

      Seeing there was nothing they could do to change his mind, Bernard and Bianca sadly left, with Jake glaring at Ratigan before he closed the door, following the other two.

         “Can you beat that?” Jake growled angrily, his ears folding back as he put his hat back on. “That selfish greedy grumpy old miser! Crikey, I’ve never seen anyone so bad-tempered.”

       “Well, perhaps Christmas time is a hard time for him to cope with, Jake,” Bianca said gently. “The poor dear did say he lost his friend Christmas Eve.”

         “So that gives him an excuse to take it out on everyone else?” Jake asked, raising his eyebrow.

        “No, but it’s understandable,” Bianca said patiently. “I know I would be sorrowful for a long time too if I lost my husband.” She hugged Bernard’s arm in emphasis. Bernard blushed but smiled, kissing her cheek. “I’m not going anywhere, Bianca,” he assured her.

        Jake sighed. “Aye, I suppose you’re right as always, Miss B,” he said. “I’m not going to judge how long someone grieves. That bloke must’ve been really close with his best mate.”            
    
        “I do hope he finds happiness again, the poor dear,” Bianca said, looking towards the window with hopeful eyes.

        “W-well, there’s, uh, there's nothing else we can do here,” Bernard said quietly. “We should, um, keep moving and get to some other houses before it gets too dark.” He began to escort Bianca down the road away from Ratigan’s warehouse.

        “Right behind you, Berno,” Jake said, hopping along after them. As he looked back at the window, he muttered, “Bet it will take a miracle to change the bloke’s heart.”

****

     As the day wore on, the fog thickened on the streets and the darkness grew heavier. The chill in the air grew more intense as workmice and rats gathered around fires to warm their hands. Just then, a family of mice came strolling by who were caroling as they were giving extra warmth and food to the poor as they passed by. They had come up to the rodents gathered around the fire, offering them extra blankets, clothes, and sweets with warm smiles and kind hands. The atmosphere felt so full of Christmas spirit and cheer that one of the rats began to sing “God Rest Ye Merry Gentlemen.” The other workers joined in as well as the carolers, and soon enough, all their voices rang sweetly down the streets.

        One mouse, who was a part of the caroling family, was a young boy named Fifval who was wearing a coat and red sweater almost too big for him and a blue hat that kept slipping over his eyes. He smiled as he saw Ratigan and Doran’s Warehouse, deciding to spread the Christmas cheer to the lonely people that could be inside. So holding up his hat, he made his way eagerly across the street. Coming up to the door, the little mouse stood on his tip toes, his face close to the keyhole, and began to sing. But at the first lines of “God rest you, merry gentlemen, May nothing you dismay—”

       Ratigan opened the door so aggressively that it made the little mouse jumped back. “Get lost you little brat!” the rat snarled, poking his head out. Poor Fifval fled in terror from the warehouse to the safety of his family as Ratigan slammed the door shut again. “Blasted children,” he muttered darkly.

       Some time after that, it was closing time for Ratigan and Flaversham. Stretching his arms, Ratigan announced this to his clerk. The mouse immediately blew out his candle and put away his books and papers, pulling on his coat and scarf as his tail wagged; he was highly looking forward to spending Christmas Eve with his family.

        Ratigan eyed his eagerness with distaste as he pulled on his own coat. “You’ll be wanting tomorrow off, I presume?”

       Flaversham nodded timidly as he buttoned up his coat. “A-Aye, sir,” he said quietly. “It’s Christmas Day after all tomorrow, sir. If it’s convenient for you, that is, sir.”

      Ratigan growled, his ears flicking back. “It’s not convenient, and it’s not fair either,” he snapped irritably, tying his scarf tight around his neck. “If I was to reduce a day’s wages from your salary, you’d think I was being unreasonable, am I right?”

       Flaversham nodded and smiled weakly.

       “And yet…” Ratigan growled, coming closer to Flaversham, towering threateningly over him. “You don’t think it’s unfair that I should pay you a day’s wages for no work at all.”

    The weak smile left Flaversham’s face as he looked up at his boss, intimidated by his enormous build and threatening eyes; he felt so small in comparison in more ways than one. “B-But it’s only o-once a year, s-sir,” he pleaded.

     “Yes, yes, every twenty-fifth of December!” Ratigan snarled, putting on his gloves so violently that his claws almost tore the fabric of the fingertips. “It’s a poor excuse for picking a man’s pocket just to sit at home!” After a short pause in thought, he sighed, rubbing his temple. “Very well, Flaversham. Have the day off tomorrow. But you better be here earlier the following morning, or else you will upset me. And you know what happens when someone upsets me…”  

    “Oh a-aye, sir. I promise, sir,” Flaversham nodded, almost choking himself as he wrapped his scarf around his neck with shaking hands.

  “Hmph,” Ratigan grunted, slamming on his hat. “Good night, Flaversham.” With that, Ratigan marched down the dark road, grumbling as he went, his cape billowing out behind him like a forbidding bat being swallowed up in the darkness of the murky fog.

Great Mouse Christmas Carol Chapter 2
Do you know how ODD it was for me to write Basil calling Ratigan "Uncle?" :o :XD: :D So weird.

Anyway, here's the second chapter, with appearances of Flaversham, Basil, Jake, Bernard, Bianca, and little Fifval. I'm so excited to get this chapter up! :la: :la: Hope you all enjoy! 

Oh and that little section of Bernard, Bianca, and Jake talking after they left Ratigan's office is not in the book, but I decided to add it. I will be doing that to some parts of the story throughout.

Previous chapter: Great Mouse Christmas Carol Chapter 1

Next Chapter: Coming soon

Great Mouse Detective and Rescuers Down Under characters belong to Disney.
Fifval and family belongs to Don Bluth
Original story belongs to Charles Dickens
Retold story belongs to me.

Please comment and critique! :peace: Much appreicated! 
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    Sebastian Doran was dead. Everyone knew this, especially his long time friend and business partner Padriac Ratigan. It was he who signed the papers with the other witnesses to make it official. It was he who was the executor of Doran’s estate stated in his will. It was he who was Doran’s only friend, business partner, and sole mourner at his funeral. Yes, Ratigan knew without a doubt that Doran was dead as a doornail. But for some reason, he never painted out Doran’s name on the front of their warehouse. It still read “Ratigan and Doran.” No one knows the reason why; some said that perhaps he just never bothered to. Others said it was to honor his old friend. But a thought like that was a little ludicrous, for even if Ratigan cared about Doran, a notion like that would mean that Ratigan still had a heart, and heaven knows if he even still had one.

    Yes, he was a tight-fisted rat, that Ratigan, a covetous, cold, greedy devil, squeezing out every penny anyone owed him until it choked them! He was ruthless in collecting what was owed to him, showing no mercy. There were rumors that he even fed those who couldn’t pay him to his cat Felicia. These were false rumors, but it was apparent that no one would be surprised if he did. Freezing weather could not bother Ratigan, for the coldness in his heart was much more bitter than any harsh winter that was dished out. And nothing, not even Christmas, ever warmed him one degree. What’s more, icy frigidness of his heart showed on the outside of his face as well. He had sharp, calculating ruby eyes, a rounded clever chin, a slithering harsh voice that was as smooth as a cobra yet harsh as spikes, and had a muscular height and build that towered over other mice and rats like an evil giant glaring down at his helpless quivering victims. No one ever smiled at him. No one ever greeted him in the streets and asked him “My dear Ratigan, how are you? Are you free this evening to come to dinner?” No child ever came up to him to ask for directions. No beggar ever came to him to ask for a pence. His countenance was so cruel looking and forbidding that even strangers on the streets who never met him before steered clear of him the moment they laid eyes on him.

    But Ratigan did not care. He actually liked this, and thought it best that it was kept that way, warning all to keep away from him least they suffer his wrath. 

Great Mouse Christmas Carol Chapter 1
FINALLY!! It's here, it's here! My first chapter of Great Mouse Christmas Carol! Apologies for keeping you all waiting! 

So here's the first chapter describing our star, Padriac Ratigan as our Scrooge of Mousedom. Sorry it's such a short chapter, but really, it's all kind of the length that Dickens used to describe Scrooge in his book. I am using Charles Dickens book as my guide for the lines, but I want to do my best to make sure it's still my own writing. I will probably have the characters say the same lines in the book, but the description I will try to be my own but still in Dicken's nature (if that even made sense.) I hope you will enjoy, and I will be having the next chapter up really soon, probably tonight.

Cast: The Great Mouse Christmas Carol Cast

Next Chapter: Great Mouse Christmas Carol Chapter 2

Padriac Ratigan and other GMD characters soon to come belong to Disney
Original story belongs to the brilliant Charles Dickens
Retelling of story is mine. 

Please Comment and critique! :peace: Much appreciated!
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My Harry Potter Collection by romancefreak
My Harry Potter Collection
So I've noticed some people posting pictures of their collections, so I decided to show you my collection of Harry Potter. And boy, do I have a lot! 
 So, A tour of my stuff! My collection includes:
*All 7 books in the series, including my very first copy, the little book with the dark blue cover in the middle that started me on my fandom. :love: 
*Quidditch Through The Ages, Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them, The Harry Potter Creatures Vault, Tales of Beedle the Bard, and Science of Harry Potter
*All eight Harry Potter movies
*Harry Potter Lego Wii games
*My Harry Potter Snuggie that my collection is laying on
*My wands: The black one is Severus Snape's wand. The rest of them my dad made himself. My personal wand is the one on the right of the one in the middle next to the Voldemort-ish-looking wand.
*Harry Potter Scene It? games, first and second edition
*My Hogwarts shirt
*My black witch hat
*My own broom
*Potions in vials 
*My wolf, Lupin (named after my favorite werewolf) :love: 
*My owl, Arctic (Her name was Hedwig, but I decided to give her my own name)
*My Slytherin scarf for my House that I'm in on Pottermore.com HP.Icon-Slytherin Pride 
*My Gryffindor necklace
*Luna Lovegood's radish earrings next to the owl earrings (They're not technically Luna's, but they are radishes, so I thought they could still count anyway. :D )
The other jewelry I have is not technically Harry Potter-ish, but they do have elements that could connect to it so I'm including it anyway: 
*My pin that says "Hunters & Doctors & Wizards & Detectives" Basically sums up everything I like, and has the word "Wizard" in it, so it counts in this collection. :XD: 
*Spider necklace
*Vampire Bat necklace
*Wolf necklace (dedicated to Lupin) 

Some pieces not included in this picture are my Slytherin Locket, but I can't seem to find it, and my Gryffindor scarf that I had before my Slytherin one, but I sadly lost it. :( 

Phew! Well there it is, guys. My collection dedicated to one of the most brilliant fantasy stories of all time! I hope you enjoy! LONG LIVE HARRY POTTER!!! Harry Potter Invisibility HP.Icon-Slytherin Pride QuirellTroll1 :Gryffindork: Gurl BOTHER SNAPE XD :chasesnape: 
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Hello. *bows gracefully* Cimmeron, at your service.
I am a huge romance freak, as my username so says.
I love dreaming up romantic fantasies and love the suave villain/heroine thing.
I LOOOOOVE music! I cannot live without it!
Theatre is my life! I love it and hope to play as Christine Daae, Mina Harker, and Elphaba one day.
I love reading, drawing, superheroes, action movies, romantic movies, singing, having fun with friends and family, animals, Disney, and other things.
I love to accept everyone and get to know them.
And HUUUUUUGE THANKS to the lovely :icontoony-tornado: for the beautiful picture of me she created I'm using for my profile!!

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Ok, so I was watching some  fan videos of Disney PrincessxDisney Villain and what not, and I noticed that there's not a lot of RatiganxDisney Princess pairings out there, which is a dang shame, because Ratigan is such a lovable villain and as freaking awesome as the other Disney Villains, maybe even more so. I've only seen a couple of videos where he's paired with human people, Belle, Jasmine, and a Non-Disney girl Holli Would. And what's weird is that people pair Non/Disney Princesses with Thrax (Non-Disney villain from Osmosis Jones) with girls all the time, and may I remind you, he is a freaking VIRUS, very very miniscule in real life, yet people pair him with Non/Disney ladies all the time, so what the heck would be the difference with Ratigan and Thrax anyway? So then I thought, "Ooooh, what if I did a roleplay where he could meet Disney Princess? Oh what fun that would be!!" :dummy: :la: 

So that's what I'm going to do here, guys. I'm going to host a roleplay here where you all bring forth and roleplay as any Disney woman you think of, Kida, Meg, Esmeralda, Ariel, Pocahontas, Captain Amelia, Belle, Jasmine, you name it, and I will roleplay as Ratigan, and we could get some adventures and romance going! :la: Now,again, I will remind you that this is a world where anything can happen, so how Ratigan gets to be the size of a human or the girl gets to be the size of a rat, it doesn't matter. You can use portals to different dimensions, some kind of magic happens, it's a world where it's ok for humans and rodents are same height and can communicate with each other, etc. Anything is possible and it's Disney magic, yo, don't question it! :laughing: Also, make sure you know their personality well enough that it will be at least mostly in character, AND have some good description in the roleplay as well, like what they are thinking and feeling and describing stuff around them.


So let's get started! Bring forth your Disney princesses and let's get them acquainted with our awesome ladies man Ratigan! :eyes: :iconratigansinisterplz: He's waiting for you...

Who is your favorite monster/mythical creature of all time? 

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ProfessorRatiganFan Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
Have a pigeon.:iconpigeonplz: XD

Lol!  What's up?
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romancefreak Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LOL, thanks. :D Nothing much, just relaxing. How about you?
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ProfessorRatiganFan Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
Nice!

Not too much!  I start school on Tuesday!
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romancefreak Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cool! :) Are you looking forward to it or regretting it?
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Milo-James-Thatch Featured By Owner 5 days ago  New member Professional Artisan Crafter
Nice art!! And thank you for the watch! :D
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romancefreak Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
By the way, Milo, have you seen this pic? Yeah, he's badass They totally captured your awesomeness right there. All that was missing was Audrey and the picture would be complete!
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Milo-James-Thatch Featured By Owner 4 days ago  New member Professional Artisan Crafter
Oh ha ha yes, I saw that one. Audrey? She's like a little sister to me! :D
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romancefreak Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So is Helga, but she's in the picture with you. :D
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romancefreak Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you! :tighthug: And You're totally welcome, Milo. It was my pleasure to Watch one of my favorite Disney heroes!

And thank you for the llama badge!
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Milo-James-Thatch Featured By Owner 4 days ago  New member Professional Artisan Crafter
My pleasure!!! :D
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